Prompt: Describe a real moment in your life that felt like the beginning of a powerful story. Tell what happened, and why it felt like a turning point in your life?

Prompt Response: A moment in my life that felt like the beginning of a powerful story was when I visited Savannah College of Art and Design (SCAD), Atlanta. I went with my mom and little sister. We visited back in the summer of 2025. It felt like a turning point in my life because I realized that I could soon end up in this school in 2 years. That next chapter of my life, after high school, is forming right in front of my eyes. 

Summary: In class we did the 'Writing Strong Commentary for Rhetoric Analysis' assignment. 

Reflection:  I learned that commentary explains how a rhetorical device works, why it affects the audience, and how it supports the speaker's purpose. 


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